Tuesday 29 October 2013

5 sentence challenge

Everyone is waiting in the waiting room for the vet to call a person with a pet. There is a big brown dog with a sore leg the big brown dog is sitting on the floor. He is looking at the cat. The big brown dog is panting. His owner is talking to another owner

By Holly
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2 comments:

  1. A Osborn29 October 2013 at 13:40

    Great work!

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  2. Mrs Duxbury30 October 2013 at 00:46

    Hello Holly,

    What a super challenge form you, I can tell that you looked really closely at the picture. I love the adjectives (describing words) 'big, brown'. They really help to describe the dog. I wonder what colour the cat is?

    From Mrs Duxbury (team 5SC)

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